Meter Reader - Gaby Duniphin
** wowsa! Gaby Duniphin sent us this killer-diller poem. as a writer with bad etiquette, i'll admit that i've never taken wholeheartedly to the poetic medium. i can say without too much apprehension that i don't always understand it, and so i run, so i don't have to try and figure it out. but Gaby's poem is certainly one i've responded to. take the time and give it a once, twice, or thrice-over...
Meter Reader - Gaby Duniphin
this one's for the sinner
the daring, dangerous scheme
in order to avoid
the things we use to place the blame
this one's for the addict
the letdown and the void
filling up so aimlessly
with tension and black soil
this one's for the innocent
the sweet ones and the brave
just trying to run away
from fears and tears and fakes
this one's for the solitude
we can never hope to find
this one's for the amber glow
we neglected, left behind
this one's for the single strand
of everlasting faith
the corresponding droplet of
sunny days we waste
this is for the child
innocent and pure
that we hope in some disturbing way
to tear down and obscure
this is for the shattered
the mishap and the loss
i hope that you can find yourself
i hope that your self taught
this is for the lonely
the dancing speck of rain
this is for the restless souls
whom never can be tamed
this is for the kindred
the normal and the safe
please preserve your fire
the one thing they can't take
this is for the old souls
the young ones and the weak
the frightening postpartum
you'll scarcely cease to speak
this one's for the ample
the able and the free
i wanna be nocturnal
i wanna take the leap
i want to find some answers
i want to keep the sun
i want to throw the ashes
of my past and help the bum
this is for the rough road
im sure that lies ahead
ill take it on with hunger
ill beat it, ill have led
this is for the memories
filling corners of my mind
this is for the love i've found
ill never leave behind
this is for the honey
dripping quickly, blessing me
the painful sinful reckoning
the chaos and the dream
this is for the altitude
that never reaches high
this is for the seconds
we let shamelessly slip by
the secrets and the stammer
the struggle and the fall
all among us finely
taking, giving all
if only we could differ
forget the unkempt mess
we could stand a little closer
attempt to breathe and bless
trust is such a humor
a joke, a pun, a stare
a feeding, viscious tumore
so sneaky, unaware
this is for the toxic
polluting naive thoughts
this is for the strong
the ones who help to make it stop
this is for the time we waste
on petty, stupid schemes
try and find the sunshine
never let your knees be weak
cry and laugh and smile
discover, fly and find
life is worth your while
life is worth your time
lets disenegrate the uselessness
and feed off wholesome will
lets build a bright apocalypse
lets run, i can't sit still


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Comments
Wow! I am completely amazed! I am not usually one for poetry, but this was BRILLIANT!!!
Kait
Queren
That was amazing! I love poetry! I really like this poem in particular because of the tragedy, but also the hope it gives specifically where it says "life is worth while." It's inspiring.
Job well done Gaby - i really enjoyed reading this :) I love reading others peoples thoughts and words.....thanks for sharing!
XoXo Lisa
I also tend to shy away from poetry...it never really "clicks" with me. That being said, I did enjoy this one very much. Thank you for sharing this :)
Great Job!! Really Awesome!
I, like Nick, often shy away from poetry because often I don't understand it. That said, I really, really enjoyed this poem. It takes an amazing amount of talent to write poetry and even more confidence to share it with others. Great job, I hope you share more with us in the future.
~Kristen~
I think someone's going to hate me in a minute. This is a way too long whining on the sadness and whatever bad feelings and lack of hope shown. And who, if now we caused the 'mess'? Why hoping for the worst. And, if it was supposed to give hope for the better days, I'm not seeing it. I know what your idea is, and the idea itself is pretty good, I must say. I just wished it was a different approach to it.
xoxo, Kasia
wow, this is great! nice job, Gaby!
AMAZING! is all i can say.
simply briliant. great job gaby!!
Wonderful job Gaby, your poem is just amazing ! Thanks for sharing it :)
Wow, just brilliant! ¦)
wow, that was truly amazing
great work Gaby Duniphin i love the entire concept of it
:)
This is an absolutely amazing poem. You did a wonderful job Gaby! I love this so much! :]
Thank you SO much! =]
noo problem at all, well deserved! Great job! you are so talented!
Absolutely BRILLIANT work Gaby Duniphin!
-Alina
I certainly wish I could write like that!
Thanks for sharing, loved it!
that was really good!! thanks for sharing it with us!! wish i could write like that!
WOW! this is truely amazing. I loved it. That's all I can say. I don't have words to explain what I felt or thought when I read it. Amazing!
<3 Brandal
wow. speachless. amazing. :) Thank you Ncik and thank you Gaby Duniphin. This has altered my freaking mind... :P
-Loren
wow! this is amazing! *snaps snaps* :)
Ashley :)
Wonderful :)