Meter Reader - Gaby Duniphin

**  wowsa!  Gaby Duniphin sent us this killer-diller poem.  as a writer with bad etiquette, i'll admit that i've never taken wholeheartedly to the poetic medium.  i can say without too much apprehension that i don't always understand it, and so i run, so i don't have to try and figure it out.  but Gaby's poem is certainly one i've responded to.  take the time and give it a once, twice, or thrice-over...  

Meter Reader - Gaby Duniphin

this one's for the sinner
the daring, dangerous scheme
in order to avoid
the things we use to place the blame

this one's for the addict
the letdown and the void
filling up so aimlessly
with tension and black soil

this one's for the innocent
the sweet ones and the brave
just trying to run away
from fears and tears and fakes

this one's for the solitude
we can never hope to find
this one's for the amber glow
we neglected, left behind

this one's for the single strand
of everlasting faith
the corresponding droplet of
sunny days we waste

this is for the child
innocent and pure
that we hope in some disturbing way
to tear down and obscure

this is for the shattered
the mishap and the loss
i hope that you can find yourself
i hope that your self taught

this is for the lonely
the dancing speck of rain
this is for the restless souls
whom never can be tamed

this is for the kindred
the normal and the safe
please preserve your fire
the one thing they can't take

this is for the old souls
the young ones and the weak
the frightening postpartum
you'll scarcely cease to speak

this one's for the ample
the able and the free
i wanna be nocturnal
i wanna take the leap

i want to find some answers
i want to keep the sun
i want to throw the ashes
of my past and help the bum

this is for the rough road
im sure that lies ahead
ill take it on with hunger
ill beat it, ill have led

this is for the memories
filling corners of my mind
this is for the love i've found
ill never leave behind

this is for the honey
dripping quickly, blessing me
the painful sinful reckoning
the chaos and the dream

this is for the altitude
that never reaches high
this is for the seconds
we let shamelessly slip by

the secrets and the stammer
the struggle and the fall
all among us finely
taking, giving all

if only we could differ
forget the unkempt mess
we could stand a little closer
attempt to breathe and bless

trust is such a humor
a joke, a pun, a stare
a feeding, viscious tumore
so sneaky, unaware

this is for the toxic
polluting naive thoughts
this is for the strong
the ones who help to make it stop

this is for the time we waste
on petty, stupid schemes
try and find the sunshine
never let your knees be weak

cry and laugh and smile
discover, fly and find
life is worth your while
life is worth your time

lets disenegrate the uselessness
and feed off wholesome will
lets build a bright apocalypse
lets run, i can't sit still

Comments

kaitlan.olivia's picture

Wow! I am completely amazed! I am not usually one for poetry, but this was BRILLIANT!!!

Kait

browneyez90's picture

Queren

That was amazing! I love poetry! I really like this poem in particular because of the tragedy, but also the hope it gives specifically where it says "life is worth while." It's inspiring.

Lisa Franzi's picture

Job well done Gaby - i really enjoyed reading this  :) I love reading others peoples thoughts and words.....thanks for sharing!

XoXo Lisa

Neera's picture

I also tend to shy away from poetry...it never really "clicks" with me. That being said, I did enjoy this one very much. Thank you for sharing this :)

Mr. E's picture

Great Job!! Really Awesome!

Krissy's picture

I, like Nick, often shy away from poetry because often I don't understand it. That said, I really, really enjoyed this poem. It takes an amazing amount of talent to write poetry and even more confidence to share it with others. Great job, I hope you share more with us in the future. 

~Kristen~

Kasia's picture

I think someone's going to hate me in a minute. This is a way too long whining on the sadness and whatever bad feelings and lack of hope shown. And who, if now we caused the 'mess'? Why hoping for the worst. And, if it was supposed to give hope for the better days, I'm not seeing it. I know what your idea is, and the idea itself is pretty good, I must say. I just wished it was a different approach to it.

xoxo, Kasia

Nicole's picture

wow, this is great! nice job, Gaby!

whitney-marie's picture

AMAZING! is all i can say.

mirela1's picture

simply briliant. great job gaby!!

Rémi's picture

Wonderful job Gaby, your poem is just amazing ! Thanks for sharing it :)

Wow, just brilliant! ¦)

mon_mon's picture

wow, that was truly amazing

great work Gaby Duniphin i love the entire concept of it

:)

This is an absolutely amazing poem. You did a wonderful job Gaby! I love this so much! :] 

Thank you SO much! =]

loren_baldwin's picture

noo problem at all, well deserved! Great job! you are so talented!

Alina V's picture

Absolutely BRILLIANT work Gaby Duniphin!

-Alina

I certainly wish I could write like that!

Thanks for sharing, loved it!

princesslyss2878's picture

that was really good!! thanks for sharing it with us!! wish i could write like that!

brandal's picture

WOW! this is truely amazing. I loved it. That's all I can say. I don't have words to explain what I felt or thought when I read it. Amazing!

<3 Brandal

loren_baldwin's picture

wow. speachless. amazing. :) Thank you Ncik and thank you Gaby Duniphin. This has altered my freaking mind... :P

-Loren

AshleyMartinez's picture

wow! this is amazing! *snaps snaps* :)

Ashley :)

niamh's picture

Wonderful :)

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